Camp was way back in Term 2 but this writing got accepted for Toitoi, a book that gets published every season to show the writing and illustrations from kids around New Zealand. This is my writing about camp, the sport of abseiling. The picture is upside down for some reason but you get the picture.
illustration pdf.
Writing:
An extremely scary sport at first glance
Burning sensation in my hands
Sight below made me shake
Everyone was cheering me on
I could barely hold the bottom of the rope
Like the trees were encouraging me as well
Instructor believed in me
Now it was someone else’s turn
Genuinely the most frightening experience ever
Great acrostic poem Phyu sin! I also love the drawing. Its awesome that you got your writing accepted for Toitoi. Keep up the great work!
Selina